- - start NaNo
- - get two days ahead
- - put in moving notice
- - house hunt
- - struggle with word count
- - find house, start packing
- - more struggle with word count
- - lots of packing
- - pack and send out NaNo swap packages
- - finalize new house
- - packing? Yep still that
- - word count finally caught up
- - NaNo ends
- - call utilities
- - packing done
NaNo so far can be easily summed up like this: I got ahead a few days, fell one day behind, caught up, fell behind some more, lost a couple days' of writing and managed to just make it on the 29th. Rewarded myself for managing it, Magnum ice cream is the most amazing thing ever. I had a hard time about week 2 with this story, I started hating it. And it wasn't even like it was work-through-it-fix-later kind of hate, it was I-don't-want-to-be-here hate. Normally I'd take a break to something else but I wasn't going to allow that during November. I ended up rewriting chapters 2-4 until I got them going in a way that made me like the story again, and I created a dump file for everything I've written but decided is not going to go into the story. That way I hadn't lost words I fair and square wrote and managed to preserve my chapters. In eight chapters my two M.C.s had three bad spats and a new character materialized around chapter 4 with some timely conversation.
Well I needed the word boost. Dialogue is good for that. Besides, it's not the first time a new character has shown up out of nowhere, and won't be the last either. We'll see how he shapes up as the story progresses.
I realized what a tricky main character I've designed here, though. She had some of her memories locked away and starts the story that way, but along with those memories she's forgotten two significant things: the man she loves and the reason for the whole thing in the first place. She's reunited with said love interest in chapter 2 and has to deal with emotions her heart remembers to a man her mind can't recall. Pinning down what that would make one say, do, feel and think is interesting, although difficult because it's something I'm having a hard time connecting to. I've never been in such a situation so what would be a realistic reaction? When would you follow your heart and when would you follow your head?
It's a challenge. And I love it.
I'm going for a story with some didn't-see-that-coming kind of twists near the end, and the whole truth of the situation comes out. Everyone has their piece of the story, or what they think is the story, and with my M.C. acting as sort of a catalyst for the truth it's going to come together nicely. Plus her mother's going to get into some serious battle action. It was a topic in the Fantasy forum on the NaNo boards, I think the pet peeve topic, and one commenter's peeve was about how older women never seem to do any of the 'fun' stuff (fight, have adventures, love story, etc). I didn't add it with a specific goal of bringing that to light, but the point kind of stuck in my head. Because you know what? It would be rather fun to see the 'mother' figure kick some butt here and there. And I was kind of taken by Rene's role in Thor and the scene when she picks up the sword to defend her husband. I was a little disappointed that she only got one strike off before being knocked aside; I mean come on, this is Lethal Weapon's Lorna Cole and the character comes from the Norse mythology and gods. Let the lady kick some ass!
Goodness, what a mess I'm surrounded with. Guess break time is over, I should get to cleaning house. Again.
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